Sunday 5 June 2016

Isaiah's narrative "Whacky Wolf"

The Wacky Wolf
Whacky Wolf tried to be really scary, but he wasn't. He wasn’t scary because everyone didn’t take him seriously. Whacky Wolf studied, read books, used his head and  practised roaring. One day Whacky Wolf went up to a cute bunny and “ROARED”!! And then the little bunny started to cry. Whacky started laughing he said “HAHA!!” I scared you and then the bunny said “no you didn't i'm crying because MY STOMACH HURTS”. Whacky Wolf had stopped scaring everyone and he gave the cute bunny a big hug. Whacky Wolf wasn't scary because he doesn't have long  sharp teeth like the other scary animals. he also wasn’t scary because he is always nice to  everyone, he always smiles to everyone, he has enormous big eyes and he has smelly stinky breath.




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The End !!!

13 comments:

  1. Well done Isaiah!!!!!
    You did a great job on your Narrative Writing. I like your theme.

    From,Paige

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  2. Good job Isaiah on your narrative writing KEEP IT UP.

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  3. Thank you guys really appreciate the great comment keep it up

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  4. Great Job. Lovely narrative writing.

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  5. Awesome Narrative Isaiah.
    Great choice, Keep the spectacular work up.
    From: AJ.B

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  6. Good job Isaiah! I like how you wrote your narrative. Keep it up!

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  7. Hi Isaiah
    I like your narrative writing. Keep it up

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  8. nice job isaiah,I really like your narrative writing about the wacky wolf.

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  9. Thank you guys so much

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  10. Great Isaiah fantastic narrative, Keep it up!!!

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  11. Great Isaiah fantastic narrative, Keep it up!!!

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  12. Good Job Isaiah. Keep up the good work.

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